Good afternoon everyone let's go ahead and get started and thank you all for coming this is a first technical communication discussion series out of all of the first discussion series and we're planning on at least one more for this semester and additional ones probably for the fall so this type of book this panel is called technical communication in the workplace computer science business in MA I'm Dr Smith and I'm Dr min ago. And I'd like to introduce our panel. We have background music in the lovely. Bob Waters who hasn't M.S. And can you see from Georgia Tech he currently works as a senior lecturer in the College of computing He's a retired Army officer and a graduate of U.S. Naval Test Pilot School so he has lots of experience with technical reports but with flight test and computer science we also have our own Rubinoff who is an attorney and he concentrates his law practice and quite a few things mergers and acquisitions Internet technology law law involving the nucular and your energy sectors corporate finance and international business transactions with particular emphasis on technology transfer and licensing joint ventures capital formation and there's a number of things Mr Ivanoff in addition to all the things that he works on is an adjunct professor in the Georgia Tech's sheller College of Business and he has been voted professor of the year in two thousand and twelve and in two thousand and thirteen lecture of the year elective business courses and then find me but. Not really Brian large then has an assistant professor in the school of literature Media and Communication at the Georgia Institute of Technology He researches rhetoric and argumentation especially in the bill and professional communication. He uses text intellect computer computer. And cognitive methods. He also has interest in law of digital media empirical research methods and he holds P.C. from the University of Minnesota he comes to Georgia Tech after a twenty year career as an attorney and businesses. So thank you all for coming and to get us started. We have a few questions to sort of engage the conversations I'll turn it over and over. Again thank you for coming. In Today we're talking about technical communication because in different fields people create different types of documents for different types of purposes and for a variety of audiences as well so my first question is connected with the definition of the field what is technical communication you want. To start so I'll be fine. With that. So if you find out what people are. Trying to build. A lot of people all the. People that I communicate. To make them aware that I think. Software. And make sure they understand together we shared. The right. So in the legal space it's a it's become because when you really hear the words technical communication used there might be used in that context for instance when writing technical descriptions of conventions is required so that's a particular part of the law but you might want to think of. Itself as a sort of fairly technical communication oriented feel because there's a little there most of what your spew what your time is to interpret and. Produce professional communications the raw materials are doing bad work are texts but are technical communications and the point of the work is text which is a text technical communication and just a family going to kick out of you doesn't your usually refer to it as technical communication. And I think technical community and standpoint when you're producing legal documents or even in meetings when you're communicating a transaction people use technical jargon which they in their own unique space understand but often that technical jargon does not carry the same Deno hating or co-located of significance in other areas of technology so you'll often see memos coming forward with all types of the breed needed technical terms which people say Everyone knows this and as I'm walking around them somewhat like a game of telephone or something tell me what this means and by the time a few different people push this along on it really doesn't mean the same thing to the same people so how do you create a communication that a third party who is not in that initial conversation could pick up something in truly understand what the parties in the communication were camping to relate to each other. Thought. Thought from within our field or. So I think everybody probably followed knew she watched the fielding of health care. With digital failure. So that was. A lot of communication problems. Government contracts all of you know a steep price maybe three people four people a magic. Building software system with hundreds of developers multiple contractors not one single company but several companies working on different pieces and had talk to each other and communicate obviously just created a shift were not. And so a lot of the functionality that was supposed to be there was not there and different people were point of failure of course you know what it was there was terrible and so there was no real clear picture because people did. Take the time to get your information to different parts of the system and the contractors never clearly communicated back up to the government the actual scope of the information they needed built. So it was kind of sad as a taxpayer it was kind of death of failure for a lot of different things but one of them was it was a failure to be able to actually communicate well. So I try a maestro kind of culture problem if you buy most consumer products you'll unpack them at home and you'll find that there's some kind of card that has a list of warnings on it things that you shouldn't do with the products you buy new had for instance a tells you not to take it in the shower with you and you might have figured that out on your own but maybe not there's a running in general. Legal culture that's grown up in our country over the years that says the people who produce products have to conspicuously one of the users of the process products of the inherent dangers in them and that's actually a bad thing the problem is that because of the break we've designed those communications they'll become a kind of background noise so that when you get that packaging chances are you see the winning card in the first thing you do is you set back side we're going after the getting sick. Card that's in the pockets of times we have to start using the product so you have so many runnings that are kind of warnings but the function is a sort of forest and you can't see the trees for the columns but that are the kinds of warnings that you really need to have in order to use the product and that's not necessarily a problem of legal communication but it's a problem that arises in the context of technical communication with a legal in protests or a legal force driving it along side so that's a kind of general that's a generalized answer not a specific story but it still gets the point across I back off I'll be the last speaker here in the row or column or with a humorous type story and this is public but it governmental technical communications we were doing in transaction one of the many years ago with the new Russian Federation This is after the U.S.S.R. integrated and we had been working on this transaction preventing a year is a very substantial one from my client's perspective and at the end the bureaucracy there wanted us to get a certain type of C.E.O. whatever name they called exactly translate some of the great seal of the United States on this well there is no such that you could put on a legal document it's not like a notary I thought stamp on Apple's deal and everyone involved was we can't we try to explain this you know that they have to check all the bureaucrats checklist that they have so I finally said my administrative assistants down to the gun with you tricks it has a different meaning our supply place I said I want you to pick me up rivets red white and blue would be great get me some wax. I need some type of lighting things like a melt away with it give me anything that kind of bald some kind of bird in the same. Eagle would be ideal for all the you know would be wonderful if you can get all their one around pan. Where we can get it and that's exactly what we did I just laid out the within this melted wax I couldn't put this earth in plain in the middle in the middle and the bureaucrats are very satisfied to be able went through what's the statute of limitations on its government documents to tell the story without represent anything. In the statute or anything but. There was a good one. I think croutons that you often see especially in the commercial. Law area dealing with technical companies develop technology most dispute I find is because there wasn't a meeting of them on it is it so much one size out with trying to commit fraud or someone is trying to not deal with whatever's most rather they did not communicate when they were entering into the transaction any clearer or so the roll off the lawyers play and also better business people for that matter is to get their communication clear and in writing so that So when you get a good look at the sit ins and draw only one conclusion from what that sentence means that's a challenging thing to do and. I want to build on what I just described because this is a couple of computer science majors who are in the room. Most of. The some of the members operating the video machinery and. So the but I mean there are a lot of software development projects these days that are being done using development methodologies that are more flexible things like agile methodology which means we don't necessarily know how to find the products going to look and the the use model of how to write a contract to have someone go. The software application has to spend everything on the contract to say what it is we're going to get at the end but the development model like like Agile for instance a group is doing that generally speaking and so you have this kind of I missed a piston the logical disagreement between the leaders and the computer science folks about how to describe what it is we're going to do here and say we're having someone in the middle or someone who can be kind of a boundary object between those two ways of looking at the world and who could help them it was and the computer science folks understand look we have to make this work for everyone so how do we turn that into a contract that's a special skill and one that I have not seen a lot and I seem probably some of the same kinds of disputes that i'm has where you're looking at the contract months and months after was negotiated and it's clear the people writing the contract want the kind of people who are doing the business and the people who are doing the business probably didn't have to read the contract and say the contract ends up being this kind of thrilling object to everyone who's involved in the transaction I think the way to San Babel is to put a communicator in the in the middle someone whose job is to make sure that there's communication across the disciplinary boundaries and it doesn't happen usually. Software or the. Content of simple. Will. Probably another thing. Some of the. Writing documents that your site. Software people know exactly what I. Could think of a few years. The air traffic control system of the United States. Because if you're flying with a man. Can't work. So they grow they were going to replace it with you know. Modern technology we're going to put new view. Go see we're going to put all those computer controlled stuff in the airplane going to make the world a much better so they wrote up the specification they said with US Green has twelve airplanes. Are sorry and have left twelve airplanes all we want you can be the smaller right the small scale so it would switch to small scale if you have more than twelve airplanes we want to be able to large scale not so two different teams coded into different modes that scope could be you know so then they came to day of the task they start flying airplanes on the simulator everything was going great on airplane two airplanes it's in small of everything's great killed exactly out there on the screen and it turns out one team had interpreted that as strictly left and whereas the other team had in Turkey that strictly greater than twelve so when exactly twelve there were on the skull the winning side you're going to between them they didn't know what to do everybody got vertigo it was care solve. That problem well students you've all suffered already you suffered poorly written homework aside your Professor think I'll take this program strong numbers together you know it proves out that it's all going to get our debt for the future you didn't write the result of music back to you know wait a moment didn't really say what we did that so it's really hard to write software facts that are specific enough so that. The people below what it is you would want to build so those you get a business and you start to contract with your mighty shopper and it's time for you gotta keep that in mind with the software developers can only feel what you get out of. It and I think that has split off of that also that I know there's this. Often the job of writing the specs or writing the scope of the project it would still be up to bid is thrown down to the person who they feel. It's least necessary to perform the project because all that great a pallet we could be using on the project he just course he just writing up the specs they're not is going to program or they're not as good as a computer scientists so therefore you're really putting their job often in the hands of. May not be as well equipped. To do that and there are companies. That go a lot of governmental compliance or understand that I. With companies in the nuclear field and that falls into a lot of governmental. Regulatory matters both in the U.S. and elsewhere so some of those companies recognize that but other companies. That I'm going to add to that because there's a common thread through we're talking about here and it's the use of precision when you're writing so if you're ready a computer program you have to be precise because if you're missing a princess something might just not work if you're writing a contract you have to be precise because if you leave two interpretations for. One part isn't a one way in one part is in one of the other way and I think even when you talk about something as simple as whether you say greater than or equal to twelve or greater than tropical less than twelve leaving that sort of. Just half go there's a lot of questions that have to do with how precise you are in your use of communications and if you as mostly younger people who are new in your careers and you're in fabric communications you're fine when you're asked to write the specification one thing you know you need to do is to be very conscious about every word you're putting on the paper every diagram that you're drawing in a way that you might never have thought you had to be while you were at university and it's just not expected for you to be that precise but in the in the practice is that we're talking about every word ends up counting and so you want to make sure you don't have any surplusage which is. What I'm producing now because I've already made my point. The US are going to shoot only thing out which is wrong I'm repeating everything I just. Think and that's just. What's. What's. Been a lot of the usual Just sharing this with. Another with another one that we have a problem with so the requirement that things are right have to be complete we have to be specified and yet they must be consulted. And so you have this battle between trying to write this complete massive home of specifications and be concise enough to somebody actually thinking. In the government right before retiring from the military in ninety five I look up I tell my wife reminds me to teach students now who were born after I retired. With whether there was this big computer system coming up the military called a sustained base information and it was going to run on military bases in the United States military base it's like the city council hospital grocery stores shopping centers we department fire department everything family housing everything. And so they were going to have this grandiose computer system that did everything but the police department would talk to the fire department to talk to the general's office you know everything. And so they wrote a special occasion for all these different pieces of the city and ninety where they wheeled the best of patients even my stack of books. Where the status is to be stood up this halt to measure a software developer work every day OK Bob build this. This is. Where we start understand. Right to a real struggle and something he will take a lot of experience to get the point where you can actually complete. The you know minimal number of words still everybody. Overdrafting up twenty percent that is the question is when I make sure that when I really try to answer the question I mean I mean the ones we talked about. You know and I think of the one thing if you think of yourself as a technical communicator and chances are that's not what you're going to be called. I mean you might be called an earlier because lawyers are basically all technical communicators in a sense you might be called a paralegal which is someone who has some legal training but isn't trained fully as a lawyer but may do many of the same kinds of tasks that a lawyer would do that they simply can't advise clients. Chances are you're not going to be kind of a technical communicator there are some firms some especially larger firms they were hired by hire people specifically to be technical communicators again in the patent space because when you're describing you're describing a patentable invention it has to meet very stringent requirements for how you describe it when you submit it to the patent. And Trademark Office so having someone who's trained specifically to that to do those kinds of communications create those kinds of drawings those things are very. That's a very specific set of skills so you might be characterized as a technical communicator there but even then you might be characterized as a patent grass person or you know any of a number of other titles so I guess the key point I want to make is the technical communication it doesn't sound like what you're doing in the law and I'm a study instance but it is what you're doing in almost every instance so it's central to the practice of law. All the answer. I suspect. That many individuals in this audience are play to build. Law school but the vast majority you are probably going to be entering the business world in some kind of test. One of the most successful C.E.O.'s I know and I work with them bravely there's someone to do does not say to himself This is relegated to the log or this is for the technical guys to write the C.E.O. This is a fellow who picks up contracts and couldn't read then and at the end of a fifty page contract say something on page forty eight is inconsistent with something a page to say he put it out himself that he's never gone to law school he doesn't hold himself as an attorney but he uses and this is something students the mind of a few students out here who've taken a business law course with me in in this in the Shelley College of Business here that I think is a business person you should use skills interacting in communication in understanding law as much as a tool that you want to use to look at all belt as want to understand finals even if you're not to be a financial person as much as you want to understand marketing even if you're not going to be a marketing person and not shy away from relegate this to a category of this is just something for the lawyers or the practical communicators to do and this individual rose to exceed the status of a pretty substantial company in really rock up type of right brain and a trivial or a lot of it to his willingness to undergo the character that he built under scare language comes in other forms of his communication but that's a skill set up Willy just clear communication is going to make your career probably much higher could peppery than it otherwise would be. Or. I haven't started to run so. Much as a rod is focused on written words there's a great deal of that in the on the substance of the matter comes in the form of written words the analysis of what comes in the form of written words but there is a lot of room for the other modes of communication many clients are not going to read a memo memo if you send a memo explaining their legal situation they want to hear it or like I'm sure a communications central You may argue before a judge and that's another task there's always going to be a tax to written tax that supports that ramp there's usually going to be written tax that supports that argument. Exhibits for trial and there's exhibits might be in the form of videos or posters already of a number of other kinds of media but I would say if you're going to drive like circles and became the relative size of the for various modes that written text circle is going to be really big compared to I'm a star of the other circles that you would draw I don't know maybe on you would you would expect a matter that I read with everything you said I go a step further a lot of this is also going to be here to question Who's your audience. And it's funny when I say really increased the spectrum of my audience I do everything in my academic side here. Eighty to ninety who are much more oriented toward the shore. Media and also just to electronic forms of communication these folks say though that are you know nearing retirement in this world who still says they can't read a newspaper on a. Computer screen or on a cell so you need to understand the audience you communicate with others just really a point there I will say that I think it's occurred to me or me that I could get by power and I know the Army. It's made a major effort according to some individuals that are officers in the Army that they try to push away a little bit from that overuse of Power Point presentation where people are trying to religious We have a lot of. Thinking what's going on and rather use the present occasion it's a way for me to say it often in my own class and now I say I'm going to shoot you know scare posted to the square I really want you to mean gauge in listening here or you know great where you're taking the bowl of poison which will trigger the fire car later so I'm trying to always think how I need to best get the attention of that audience and best reach them in a communicator mode that they're most comfortable with. C.F. with the same thing in every possible mode of giving a good pick up just about so we have a lot of visual stuff all of our design docs actually unified modeling language which is a bunch of diagrams that communicate just by each other the way we talk about design course the lowest level of the coding tell has coming so you have to see just one question you need to calm your code. But coming from the well is actually a skill that can develop and I just feel proud to be that you got paid for us to be here you know workers. Who are trying to reach out there's coming but there's also oral presentations by me from the time your junior developer your participation in code reviews and define them speak about and explain how the code works so that everybody will agree to a code to post to all the way up to where you were lead developer and you're trying to convince your team this is the way we need to go on the desire to mark the car park focus your car architecture we're going to do on this project and then talking to your customers and convincing them giving them a war. You know your problem when you're addressing a problem you're going to hear the code. For where we tried we tried to do it. So I saw you know speak. Practical fingerprints paved. The way. Let's talk about skills and technical it's. Somewhat what's. That's. The whole thing number one obviously you want to be able to write what. You want to develop that skill set and one can do with Georgia care even though in that you normally associate that with maybe a pure liberal arts type program I mean the students that I found the right extremely well so you know they're picking that up here the keratin from high school that increased their ability here that you need to be able to write well but then you need to keep yourself open to. Have again communication is changing every day and sticking up a story about it was a classic good story to explain ourselves but here's a girl went before the smart phone market. Really increased to where everyone carries one who are still using the Web site and therefore when you're texting you be using that short little letter communication I made a point of having a few of my students teaching with all those little things L O L's and all that Meg The reason being I had corded nephews and nieces I was the oldest of all the brothers I'm always the only one who communicated with them in their language their parents go astray they talk me through text messages more than make up their And they think I'm the youngest of the brothers so again they're just using a separate stick example of that was the way you reached everything you had to learn that communication so my interest want to keep learning communication not stuck with no milar I welled up. Working with very large friends and at last. They are there and I welled up in the international room which was something that was pretty. And in part I got in there because during college I had a stronger than a man in physics so it was a post a lot of my mother to take and. I was the one as individuals communicate communicate with a lot of the firm's technology clients who were doing international work so again having an academic Foundation is just your discipline just can't help it he said. I think I would reiterate that I mean maybe extend that all but by saying at SAS and if you go back twenty five hundred years to Cicero and others who were saying how do you teach a good or a good speaker for a good communicator there was so you need that person to be man around it and that man this is particularly true because. You're communicating about a rise right if human endeavor some of the law touches on I'm asked every aspect of people's lives. That were rounded message which I think is really important in terms of the good writing thing I want to I want to be a bit more detail about what that mix like in the rock. You can be an outstanding writer and get to mask for instance if you might be thinking about and be very stressed rated because essentially your teachers and I telling you to get it would have all the sort of remembered crude and thoughtful approaches that you've used in your wedding over the years and instead they want you to read to a sort of argumentative template you might say and that can be very frustrating but it serves a really important purpose because all the readers who are going to approach the text that you would create are expecting things to find a certain pattern and I'm going to fathom that pattern you're making now. For them every step of the way I'm going to push back on what you're writing. So you're what you really need to be is a good writer who is comfortable adapting to very different styles of writing something that's very different writing for jobs than it is writing for a client who doesn't have any legal background and you have to be prepared to adapt very quickly I'm sorry it's not just good writer but couldn't really flexible writer. I was going to elaborate I enjoyed something that was just mentioned a moment ago which made me think some of the reference to Cicero. Again going back to this point of broadening your sculpt my closest friend a township Ischl priest who has not just a Ph D. but a Ph D. in psychology and all the academic credit for a Ph D. in philosophy that we have a robust thesis there so he will have friends visit coming to town by way to see if I took the risk of telling him Professor of Philosophy of the Catholic University and I would sit in on these wonderful sessions which I would have to read things that are various for something I never read like Aristotle's Nicomachean Ethics and again by doing that and forcing your brain to function in areas that otherwise you get in the last year to develop better communication skills. So. There's really a bunch of different. Areas of C.S. majors going to. Be honest you could actually find an injury level coding position where you sat in a cubicle someplace acting and not be a very good writer and nine hundred but that's probably not what you would be attacked you were graduating high school with the job of twenty one days or so if you're if you're going to go to consulting Anderson so then man you got polished presentation skills because you're going back. I'm with the C.E.O.'s of the corporate lawyer that you've got to be able to come in there in the press that you know what you're doing you're going to deliver this system you understand their business problems you're going to be able to deliver if you get into a level position at a at a regular coding shop and I shop you know an in-house quality you'll start out just you know being able to function in a team and communicate you know to basically be able to write you know good human health and and communicate like that and then you should go up to become a tech lead then you have to be able to start to lead to happy reservations now you're interacting with with managers and stuff and you're having to pull your team along pull them together get them focused in the right direction and you have to be able to write feasibility studies cost benefit analysis of those things for the computer system the bill. My goodness I thought. That. The way I learned about Fortunately I didn't learn it in school I was a horrible writer when I was at school. I got commissioned a second lieutenant you know I could write. What was I doing our term paper I could write an essay on what I thought about. The world situation or whatever but I couldn't write anything tech I had no clue what I was going to be there I was terrible for Senator Kerry the speaker really nervous scared out of some so in the military of course. I didn't really become a good writer until I got assigned with You Tube I was the executive officer in Birmingham and we had rights to work like stuff during the Cold War and my boss was a good writer. And so every time I studied something he would come back just just drawing and I kept sending him to destroy standards. So after three years of having my documents you know I do the shredded tires guy actually came out there and actually what I am because I have learned the hard process of just writing over and over again and having a jacket and realizing what the people were like she's looking for and. So it's probably you know it's like I tell my students to PONY You know I play guitar so I could come up here I could draw all the guitar scale all the chart chords I can tell you all the tar the Major been entirely my timing you know here's a happy medium scale but if you don't pick up a guitar actually practice you don't know how to play guitar write My know a lot of the rebels write the same way you know privately and you don't really try to be combative and you're kind of destined to state things all right. It's a good idea to give fortune up to have a mentor or say that who of work repeat your writing that is a great thing to do other alternatively Also I'll just see things that are well written and I'll sometimes I didn't have this now especially with computers are so easy to preserve because I just have massive folders in file cabinets and pull out you know a great paragraph a great provision of a contract and then just by replicating get a few times and absorbing it you start using actually in writing style as your earlier laughs that way to later obviously appear academically get better but I would say definitely eight writing courses while you're in college where there's a professor who will really critique your writing because I think that's the best way to really force you to keep writing and rewriting till you get it correct. I think that's And so there's a you there's an intersection of two things that the. Press is better talking about that are important one is practice because. If you're not practicing you're probably not getting better and the other is having some kind of view of what you were reading or writing so that you were thinking about what makes it work and that's right you know so people like. House and others will tell you that it's having a we're talking learn to us about the tax write does this particular tax work to work in this particular context right as a writer of this text think this is going to work if you grant you find good examples you know if you really are you're reading a step brief to the U.S. Supreme Court you probably want to read the briefs of ever written and run at the U.S. Supreme Court so you can see what what's the model and then don't just stop there think about running those tax look the way they do because that's how you're going to construct your tax to work effectively as their text and by text here I really mean any kind of communication I should just say artifact right here communicative artifact is going to work because you're going to understand not just how others have worked but you're going to have some idea of what the mechanisms are that allowed them to work and you're going to take advantage of those same mechanisms in your readers or those who are going to see your communications so it's this combination of getting your hands on it and trying to messing it up and getting feedback if you're lucky from a professor or a mentor and then try again and eventually you just get good at it and practice is the key I mean you know I don't know anybody who starts out as like a terrific writer and the professional contacts they need to practice. Will give you feedback on your question if you feel been asked a different way. The answer generally is you don't and the reason you don't have to do is there's a treat that roughly one hundred seventy three countries. So you have almost every commercially significant country in the world that started it's called the UN Convention on the Red Nation and enforcement of far more patrols of wars under that convention you can state that the contract will be interpreted under the law you can choose what more you want to go with that beautiful Georgia law to the law of being in the world US and you can stipulate the anguish that will be controlling So even though the contract at times may be interpreted to another language for the convenience of. Folks in the different country you're stipulating that English is going to be the controlling world which if you don't have that it's really very challenging to overcome because anyone who speaks more than one language knows it's often than a call interpretation of a word or even a sentence into a sentence or word of another so you really have to say the playing field is being which is something our mention of over international business courses with hardly hear. What new threshold in history for the first time in the history of man. And woman. Maybe since the all biblical. More people speak a second language and speak their first language so there's more people who speak English as a second language then speak. There and speak any given way in which. It's the first one so as a result of that it's generally not that challenging to get close to the three that English is the government. That also means that you get a party to the paramedic correcting it the other side gets the first shot at that. And try to make them maybe write it in their second way or stand up or grammatically it can be challenging or that we try to shoot or we'll put the first draft there and then you are calling them what you want to. Go back by military and we did some joint flight test with NATO. And the standard under NATO the standard flight test for Britain. And they would have to interpret the pilots have to speak English most yet you have the national interest me plus. I don't have to have that so I'll let that one go. That's right. Let's. Just. Say. This. Is. What often happens and what almost becomes essential in many situations is that the person who needs a lawyer to help them with the biggest seller good is going to see who has some kind of expertise or knowledge of the subject matter from a business perspective as well as from a legal perspective so you may work with America. For instance who was previously a computer programmer I'm not quite a few of them already who previously did a similar kind of work and oftentimes folks who get somewhat disappearance and to ask will come out ready to practice in an area where they have some subject matter expertise from a friend rascal. And that's how I think best problem is usually sad if it's sad that I have oftentimes I was just not soft unfortunately because letters mean players are trained to believe they can do anything. They could ever ask really rather than think they can do anything and I mean this man is not a cat but there are quite a few who think they can. Usually articulate people come to my office when they're freshman or sophomore and I tell you know if you take a look at what area you're interested in you know the software for and if it's fine you can he go over to the business and take classes understand what you know actually inventory what differ from periodic out what it is about much what cash flow or all that because if you're going to go talk to nations bank to be there try to be the head of there are some day you know you have talked their way. You know financing classes or reading my business or my biology if you're going to work for a big pharmaceutical. You know if you want to go to the C.D.C. You know I think. That if you can speak. I think that's safer to go with a mirror trying to point out I don't know. And trying to understand them a bit if you've actually had training after I don't know that catalogue of stalking you know you can walk right in and start talking to you and they're right to really press as opposed to never having to explain why you know what damage here. It's all about. This. It's. It's. It's it's. You know it's. I think if it's a well written contract it shouldn't be that difficult difficulty maybe that you're coming from a reading style that's more novel based or easy to read based newspapers magazines what they say because we've got because record. They say that a seven or a. Magazine. So it may just be the challenge of reading some of these details because it is like a way of simple example I'll start a controversy of Tea Party and say you know Sally and Jim to start selling good here by agreed to do the following Jim Shelby this and Sally shall do this and then he shall know what is the key is that you're still in the ego's accept the concept of maybe repeating the name down in a novel you're not going to keep repeating the need to stop going to the pronouns but often go to pronouns of the contract when you have especially like you say to maybe it's Jim and Bob it's a given bother them. By doing they didn't get in the N.B.A. is which of the two is the he really very often contracts I think are more challenging to read only because I often stated Mack there basically using words you're trying to follow a total logical sequence and if you do it for a while you can go though this in his latest post is but it's an article in the review that. Depends a lot on the audience I mean if you read if you read the privacy policy on Facebook which is a legal document it's actually pretty accessible compared to many others if you read the pipe privacy policy on some other websites you might find that it's completely opaque and you can't make head or tail of it without spending a whole bunch of time now that I think I was reading if you spend enough time you could probably figure it out but then you're going to have to ask yourself the question how much time is it worth for me to figure out the privacy policy on you know A.B.C. dot com Well I'm not really that interested in knowing so I think there is a there is a there has been an effort in Iraq in the past to do. Like a plain language approach the problem with that is that plain language can level out some of the necessary legal distinctions between the meanings of terms and say if you every time you mention stop it which is a legal concept right actually one of Smith's separate legal concepts but every time you mention that you have to explain what it means in plain English then the size of the contract becomes unmanageable and we're back to ensure we have to spend a lot of time reading it to interpret it so there's a tension that happens there if it's just too loose negotiating a contract there can be a different problem that is never run sends a draft a lawyer to know the truth might say this is abysmally written and I think I should just start all over. But it's not going to be very welcome for you to send back a draft and the right to completely star chamber for write they've sent you a draft of the kind of hoping you'll use theirs up as a starting point now you can back it up like crazy but what should happen if you have them is a kind of. Drafting by committee and one side may not really see it the same way as the other side. Me on some language that might not make their minds when it may not have mattered and so it's difficult to read the contract to know which of many possible interpretations were intended to not to think of it as math and words I think we think of it as words that are trying to be as magical as they can be. The whole crew is a great philosopher that describes the open texture of language so he says that no matter what you try to do with language it's never going to contain all the thoughts you want to contain because the stuff the language works it never has worked that way so I think that's the the challenge is that it's such a special as the effort disengaging with such complex concepts that most of us don't deal with every day that make it. Very difficult to get depends upon what it is I was by the interview was talking more of a contract between sophisticated business. If you go to something like a privacy policy that should clearly be in a way that the audience again going to come in early the audience for the private policy is your consumer and you consumer should be able to read and understand if you're putting out a privacy policy that can be read by. Saying moderately educated individuals you're not writing a good private privacy policy you're writing something that may have a lot of legal significance to it in your mind but it's not accomplishing that goal and that is literally individuals who know what you're fourteen and making them comfortable so they don't feel like they didn't live up to whatever they thought you were doing so if you warrant. A warranty on a product should be written in a way. That a consumer can understand what it is they're getting in the way of a warranty and what is there now so they don't later feel that there was a forced expectation elevated so that kind of writing into it you may call it legal writing with its writing to explain the concept look at what I was answering the question I'm looking at but within a contract which often I get contracts work gets relatively detail remains right jet fuel contracts that you get into physics because one of the plane lands in Saudi Arabia fuels expanding as opposed to say to Norway so you have to deal with the physics of the expansion and contraction of the old in measuring and Chuck putting down the price points so that type of thing is pretty deep there but so that theoretically at the reporting reading it can only come to one conclusion what you tried to explain. Or. Rest or sort. Of. Wiring. Was. About. What you walked. Into. Our. Polls across. So. You. So I was. Last. Week. So I'm new to Georgia Tech I just got here in August and Georgia Tech is the land of what I call the F T I lay the freaking three letter acronym and I noticed the F T L is a four letter acronym because I refuse to take part in it but there are plenty of fairly rock and M's around here too so if you're new to judge attack what you find yourself doing a lot of cases just trying to figure out what are these things the people are saying mean. And the people who aren't new and who have lots of work to do so I'm going to write meeting for instance with a group of faculty who've been here for a long time it would really slow them down to have to spell out all these acronyms for me and I accept that I expect that right but part of my job is to learn those and then part of my job as I see it with someone who's new if I'm talking to them one on one is not to use them right I'm going to say you know the class thing instead of the C. Well C. because I think it's easier to remember a class from plan to have been to just have the acronym so I think the key I think if you want to be good at that is to reach with people who are using different disciplinary vocabularies talk to them. And read what they're writing you will recognize that they're not doing the same things that you were doing but you have to be sensitive to that as a communicator you always have to be sensitive to what the people are trying to communicate to typically do or typically expect and respond to that so I think it's mostly engaging by listening and reading and talking and writing with them that you are but you'll be ready to do that and again it's practice it gets easier as you get over you start learning those acronyms and other kinds of cabaret faster in a new environment at least I think you do. One of the bad things that I've learned since the beginning of your science is we overload the term really bad where we're nice different things in different there are other sciences like like the word control or we just I've been covering this class I teach on design. Control it actually has to give a nice there's this model if you control or architecture or the controller gathers the user input and then there's a controller the first class half the life that's just so just so they're two totally different things but we say more so if you start to talk about this classical controller. OK Which which time you got a better job or a soft so you can be really tell your people throughout time we're using a client server architecture there are a lot of different ways to realize that you know so you know it sounds precise actually not that there's all kinds of variations of that that that people may not know so that jargon is actually. A tough problem to get around to just start throwing out those words in your document without really explaining them sometimes because they believe they need a way different things to different people even in the same field or at least computer science as. Well.